Comments on: A few days in Seattle http://faganm.com/blog/2005/07/19/731/ Thu, 28 Jul 2011 11:21:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: mfagan http://faganm.com/blog/2005/07/19/731/#comment-47 mfagan Sun, 07 Aug 2005 23:55:17 +0000 http://www.faganfinder.com/wp/2005/07/19/731/#comment-47 <p>lol </p> lol

]]> By: Mattt http://faganm.com/blog/2005/07/19/731/#comment-46 Mattt Sun, 07 Aug 2005 23:38:33 +0000 http://www.faganfinder.com/wp/2005/07/19/731/#comment-46 <p>I suppose I should have proof read my rant/joke before posting it. Oh well. </p> I suppose I should have proof read my rant/joke before posting it. Oh well.

]]> By: Mattt http://faganm.com/blog/2005/07/19/731/#comment-45 Mattt Sun, 07 Aug 2005 23:38:06 +0000 http://www.faganfinder.com/wp/2005/07/19/731/#comment-45 <p>Seriously, use proper sentences or I will murder you in your sleep, Mike. “Should be fun” is a sentence fragment, comma splicted with “it’s my first time there.”</p> <p>That doesn’t even make sense!</p> <p>Acceptable alternatives,</p> <p>It should be fun. It’s my first time there.<br /> It should be fun; it’s my first time there.<br /> It should be fun: it’s my first time there.</p> <p>You may also consider replacing “it’s” with “it is”, since we should all strive to reach Data’s level of perfection. </p> Seriously, use proper sentences or I will murder you in your sleep, Mike. “Should be fun” is a sentence fragment, comma splicted with “it’s my first time there.”

That doesn’t even make sense!

Acceptable alternatives,

It should be fun. It’s my first time there.
It should be fun; it’s my first time there.
It should be fun: it’s my first time there.

You may also consider replacing “it’s” with “it is”, since we should all strive to reach Data’s level of perfection.

]]> By: mfagan http://faganm.com/blog/2005/07/19/731/#comment-37 mfagan Wed, 20 Jul 2005 02:01:25 +0000 http://www.faganfinder.com/wp/2005/07/19/731/#comment-37 <p>Yes, other than sterling. I usually expect people reading this <em>not</em> to be people I know in-person (or through someone I know in person). </p> Yes, other than sterling. I usually expect people reading this not to be people I know in-person (or through someone I know in person).

]]> By: kats http://faganm.com/blog/2005/07/19/731/#comment-36 kats Wed, 20 Jul 2005 01:56:11 +0000 http://www.faganfinder.com/wp/2005/07/19/731/#comment-36 <p>you mean other than desterli? </p> you mean other than desterli?

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